0supereg0 - Hawkeye (Slipping into the Stellar Sublimeness)
Nice idea, but a bit too heavy on the jingly-jangly things, they get really tiring after a few bars. Tone those down with a low-pass filter (or stop doing them after the intro), but keep the dreamy guitar.
@3:22 - oh, those jingly-jangly things suddenly stopped! Why? I don't know, their abrupt departure sounded rather random, but my ears welcomed the change for sure.
At around the 5:00 min mark - wonderful pads, now that actually sounds like
stellar sublimeness to me!
This track has the potential to bring me to another level of consciousness, but every time I get captivated by its downtempo rhythm and dreamy sounds, I get yanked back into reality by something happening abruptly. Like that sharp synth at around 7:16, where the guitar also inexplicably gets moved to the left channel. Eh?...
Anyway, lots of great ideas here, lots of potential, but the execution could've been better.