Northstar - Lone in space - arranged by manganoid offline
Review by Remedy, 31/05/2010
OK I just happened to stumble upon this one and went over it quickly so I'll just recap a few points here. Although it has substance it lacks impact, you gotta keep up with consistency throughout the whole tune and from what I gather, in your song the impact comes later, at the final part of the song. You should give it an idea of a story going on around not just sticking to the basic theme trying to reinterpret it. Well I like the tune but you should come up with your own idea of the rhythm section and as how to give it more dynamics. Go back to the drawing board and rethink it again. You don't have to be into mastering thing, gotta go by your own gut feeling. I wish I could help you out but for now on I think I'll just pass this info on to you.
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