Re: [GAME] 4 Word Story: The Book of Kickassio

[Vandahlia_Music]

that he had trouble

()

[LMania]

holding it straight. Kickassio

(hahaha I love such moments in the story)

[Vandahlia_Music]

raised an eyebrow and

[LMania]

began laughing uncontrollably. "Hahahahahahaha!"

[Vosla]

"What is so funny???!"

[LMania]

"Bwhwahahaha this is droll."

[Vosla]

Murtceps repeated the gun and

[LMania]

threatened manically: "You'll REGRET

[Vosla]

this!!"
CLUNK! The gun

[Vandahlia_Music]

suddenly began falling apart

[LMania]

, its many barrels rolling

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I have modified small parts in the cotton candy world section that made no sense or lacked coherence.

- I have removed the "My base!" part from Murtceps - that was meant to fit the other scene at mohawk woman's place and made no sense here
- Instead, Murtceps enters the cotton candy scene from behind the trees.
- Kickassio starts out in a candy pavillion, so there are actually some support beams for him to knock down later on.

Please review and let me know if you disagree with the changes https://remix64.com/supporting-pages/fo ... chapter-14
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[Vandahlia_Music]

in different directions while

(The story modifications look fine to me. I've never had a problem with these occasional fixes - I trust your sense of style, LMania! )

[Vosla]

the shells simply tinkled

( I lost track anyway. lol )

[Vandahlia_Music]

to the floor. Kickassio

[LMania]

just took a seat